The Deserted Island

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The deserted island and the memory loss

All i remember was falling into the ocean and drifting away from the boat and then waking up on a deserted island beach with no food or water or no one to talk to all i had to spear was a pocket knife oh yea and my name is milly and my birthday is on august the 23rd 2001.

I was stranded on an island alone or from what i thought was alone when i got hit by a branch and lost my memory and i didn't know where i was.

It was pitch black i don't remember a thing when i woke up again i looked like a wreck i had bear scratch marks on me and all my food that i thought i had gathered had been eaten i think i got attacked by a bear and then i heard a stick break i followed the noise with my pocket knife.

I thought i saw a human so i ran i ran as fast as i could then i stopped i thought to myself why am i running it was someone from my own species i should be asking questions about where i am or how i got here or who are you i said out loud as a strange and disgusting figure came towards me.

It was a man not much older then me he said that it was not safe in this part of the jungle and on this part of the beach so i followed the person he said his name was august i thought to myself i have heard that name somewhere but i couldn't remember i fainted right there right now i remembered waking up in august's arms i was surprised he was still there he said i suffered a short term memory loss and that he was my husband i said that was impossible and i didn't believe him then i said that i remembered him from somewhere but i didn't know where i screamed there was a bear behind us he dropped me and grabbed my hand and told me to make a run for it

I ran like i did at the marathon wait i stopped and yelled i remembered something i ran a marathon and i won it a wild horse trotted towards me i hopped on the horse it went to august and the bear was scared.

The bear was scared because it was not just any horse it was the king of the jungle and he was friends with the lion that ripped the bears leg off at least that's what i herd wait i just thought of something else the bear was savage and cruel and well hungry i wonder how august didn't get eaten straight away?

The horse led us to the fort in the jungle and then he said we would meet again when i get attacked by the same bear in 3 days

Three days later we ran out of food so i went out to try and find some food i went back to the same beach and then the same bear was on the same beach this time it didn't attack then as i walked up to it i fell into a trap it was as cold as the winter time and it was a bear trap it was a trap set by another bear it wasn't possible tho no one else was on the island and the bear it wasn't a man it was a woman and it was only protecting its babies and when the bear got me down from the tree trap i thought it was gonna eat me so i closed my eyes in fear…