this is my story with all the sentence starters i added
Hot chip left on the beach
Chips
I am just a hot chip lying on the beach just trying to get a tan,you know the usual when I got a serious burn I went fully brown.I didn't realize that I drifted away from the shaw. Then out of
nowhere i started falling apart like a rose on a wedding day.
Then I thought I got saved but I wasn't saved.It was only the beginning…
When I got swallowed by the whale I found I wasn't the only that thought i was saved,but it sadly wasn't a chip it was a piece of gum on a pavement.Did you know that a whale can eat something there size or just over there size. When I swallowed I got swallowed with a rugby ball and he was very sad.
He had never been thrown around before and he always dreamed to be thrown around but his dream was completely over,we felt very sad for him then when we all went to sleep we heard a loud screech,it was a cupcake in the middle of the ocean and she was screaming because she was in a Whale's mouth almost falling asleep. Falling asleep in the mouth and it was the most dangerous place to fall asleep.
When she woke up she was in the stomach with the rest of us half eaten old things then when we thought it was the end for all of us UNTIL the whale threw up all of the things he ate for the past year and a half it smelt soooo gross.So gross that all of us wanted to throw up but we just held our breath and pretended we were on a private beach Oh wait we were on a private beach we were just too busy to notice with the whole whale eating us thing.
Then when we got there we partied like we were free and always were free.When we got there I found a new best friend and his name was dog and oh no he ate me this happened all over again and this time’ I wasn't so lucky I died and everyone missed me at least that's how I remember it .
The end
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